Using my log from last week's
Protectors kill for comparison:
Mathian (7:47 fight length, 80560 DPS)
Lazer (6:03 fight length, 108326 DPS)
1) You're using Wrath way
too much and as such are spending less time using Starfire, which has a higher DPET than Wrath by a considerable margin. I only had 2 fewer Starfire casts than you in a combat that lasted 1:40 less and you spent a much larger portion of your time casting Wrath compared to me. You should be using Starfire as your primary nuke during Celestial Alignment.
2) It looks like you're spending too much time casting DoTs. You should be applying both DoTs at the beginning of each Eclipse, at the beginning of CA and as your last cast exiting CA, then cycle through to your next Eclipse.
3) It looks like you understand not to cast more than one Starsurge per Solar except when the cast to exit Solar would be a Starsurge, but you should be using it on cooldown outside of that situation (including outside of Eclipses).
4) Every usage of Incarnation should be at the beginning of a new Lunar Eclipse, and you should use CA immediately after that Eclipse ends. You should save a Starfall to cast before you enter Lunar to get three consecutive buffed Starfall casts. You're looking at a CD rotation like this: get to 75 Lunar Energy -> Starfall -> Wrath -> Incarnation + NV + Potion -> DoTs -> Starfall when the buff runs out -> Starfire/Starsurge til 0 energy -> CA + both DoTs -> Starfall when the buff runs out -> Starfire/Starsurge til less than 2 seconds on CA remain -> both DoTs -> continue toward Solar. It's VERY important to be doing this during Heroism. Moonkin are incredibly bursty right now, so executing this CD rotation is critical to optimizing DPS.
Hope this helps. PM me for my realID if you need anything else.